Working+Thesis

Nursing homes are essential to elderly for it provides loved ones with constants care, a healthy diet and fun activities.
 * Working Thesis:**

Nursing homes are essential to our society for they provide the unhealthy with constant care including Medicare, a healthy diet and activities that keep the aged active.
 * Final Thesis:**

What about nursing home abuse/neglect? Does that need to be addressed in your thesis statement as well? Keep working.